Great blog post Elijah, you have included lots of interesting pictures and explained what we did on the day. How could you improve your post? Using arrows was a nice touch, maybe you could include a video post on the trip- screencastify? Keep up the great work.
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Great blog post Elijah, you have included lots of interesting pictures and explained what we did on the day. How could you improve your post? Using arrows was a nice touch, maybe you could include a video post on the trip- screencastify? Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeletethank you Mr Adams i will take that into consideration. I could make my blog post better by including a couple more slides and photos.
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