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Wednesday 9 May 2018

All about Me!

All about me, Elijah. I hope you enjoy my presentation.


5 comments:

  1. Your blog is so cool Elijah, the backgrounds are very nice too.

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  2. Hola, i’m Elma from Belfast School you did a very amazing job at your work and slide and you should post more amazing videos to your blog and make some more slides so other people could watch more.And you should add some more themes to your slides when you make more.The best part about your blog is when you did your family and other things you share with other people. Keep it up.

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  3. Kia Ora Elijah I'm Noah from Awahono School,
    This is amazing because you've added so much colour and excitement and good detail to your work. Did you know I like playing with dogs too they’re so much fun! Next time, you could add more detail, like be specific, like what do you do while playing with your dogs? Do you speak fluent spanish?

    Kind Regards,
    Noah



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  4. Kia Ora, I’m Zak from Belfast School. I really enjoyed reading about you it was very interesting how you have multiple hobbies. I thought your backgrounds were really cool they were interesting to look at and made the writing stand out. Next time you should change the text colour because it was hard to read some of the text. Apart from that your slide was amazing. Keep up the good work.

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  5. Well done Elijah, I really like all the vibrant colours in your presentation. I also like how you have plenty of references at the end of the presentation. On slide 4 however, it may be best to change the colour of the words or the background, as it is a little difficult to read. It’s really cool that we both enjoy popcorn and maths because it shows that we have things in common. I’m really intrigued to find out why you like otters so much.

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