Kia Ora Elijah I'm Noah from Awahono School, This is amazing because you've added so much colour and excitement and good detail to your work. Did you know I like playing with dogs too they’re so much fun! Next time, you could add more detail, like be specific, like what do you do while playing with your dogs? Do you speak fluent spanish?
Well done Elijah, I really like all the vibrant colours in your presentation. I also like how you have plenty of references at the end of the presentation. On slide 4 however, it may be best to change the colour of the words or the background, as it is a little difficult to read. It’s really cool that we both enjoy popcorn and maths because it shows that we have things in common. I’m really intrigued to find out why you like otters so much.
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Your blog is so cool Elijah, the backgrounds are very nice too.
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ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because you've added so much colour and excitement and good detail to your work. Did you know I like playing with dogs too they’re so much fun! Next time, you could add more detail, like be specific, like what do you do while playing with your dogs? Do you speak fluent spanish?
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Noah
Well done Elijah, I really like all the vibrant colours in your presentation. I also like how you have plenty of references at the end of the presentation. On slide 4 however, it may be best to change the colour of the words or the background, as it is a little difficult to read. It’s really cool that we both enjoy popcorn and maths because it shows that we have things in common. I’m really intrigued to find out why you like otters so much.
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